Yeh dil ab mera na raha!
Is Dil ko ilzaam na dijiye
Ab woh mera kaha raha...
Seene ko tatol rahe hai kab se
Na jaane chup gaya hai who kaha
Zara dekho toh yeh badmassh
Tumhaare dil ke pass to nahi?
Agar ho toh zaroor batana mujhe
Do dil - ek dhakdan hum bhi sune to sahi...
-Ships
posted by Ships at
8:19 PM
7 Comments:
awesome..u are good at hindi poems also..
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Anonymous, at 9:59 PM, February 08, 2010
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Yemula Pradeep, at 9:27 AM, February 12, 2010
Wah..!! wah....!! Good one....!!!
pyar ke mausam me, dil ko khud chupaye rakhte ho...!!
kisi aur par, dil ko churane ka ilzaam karte ho...!!
apki ye haseen sher khud is raaz ki bath kahti hain...!!
ki koi dilwali hi itne dildar sher likh sakti hain....!!
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Yemula Pradeep, at 9:30 AM, February 12, 2010
wah wah..bahot khub
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Ratnesh, at 9:19 AM, February 13, 2010
@Utkarsha: Thanks!
@Pradeep: Nice repartee.. you write well :)
@Ratnesh: Thanks!
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Ships, at 9:10 PM, February 14, 2010
this is really nice life is another story when you are in love keep it up!
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Anonymous, at 10:20 PM, March 18, 2010
it is gods gift when you can put your feelings into words and that also so beautifully
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Anonymous, at 10:33 PM, March 18, 2010
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