JUST ENJOYING YOU...

From strangers, to friends, to close friends, and beyond…
I never knew, before knowing you,
how empty my life had been.
I thought I was happy. I thought I was successful.
What you brought into my life can never be assessed.
What you brought into my life can never be assessed.
We are so very different, you and I.
And yet so much the same.
We talk.
I valued most the way we talked
about any thing any time any where.
And each time I listen to you,
each time I ponder what you've said,
I learn something new.
About you. About me. About the world.
I've learned to trust in your instincts.
I love the vitality and zest that is so much a part of you.
I love the vitality and zest that is so much a part of you.
I never would have believed the breeze, could be so filled with life.
I treasure that spark of spirit in you,
that flashing flare of fire that animates all that you do.
It's easy to see how much you love life,
even when life is sometimes less than lovable,
and that love is always mirrored in your eyes and smile.
You are impatient and easy to anger,
too intolerant when you should tolerate,
too forgiving when you shouldn't forgive.
You allow the stresses of life to mold your day,
allow the commitments of life to shape your way.
I know your imperfections as well as your perfections,
I know your imperfections as well as your perfections,
know your faults as well as your assets.
And I find I like you not in spite of those,
but as much because of them as anything else.
I love the way you understand me too well.
It's uncanny sometimes how well you know
my thoughts, my feelings, my moods,
frightening at times how closely our lives have become interlinked.
You know so much of me,
secrets I've never told,thoughts I've never shared,
parts of me I've never seen myself.
You've discovered a window into my being,
a window I didn't know was there,
a window no one else has ever found.
I love the way we have fun doing the strangest things,
I love the way we have fun doing the strangest things,
or the way we can enjoy each other doing nothing at all.
We shop and walk, eat and talk,
playing games apart and united.
We study and drill, work and play,
listening to music and singing the words together.
We have fun with each other,
frolicking in our shared pleasures,
you enjoying the thrill of life,
me just enjoying you...
-Ships
12 Comments:
Hey Shipra,
I am a regular visitor of your blog and I simply love the way you write your poems. They are so touching...I can connect myself with your poems.
Amazingly good!
Keep up the words flowing like this only!
:)
By
Sneha, at 12:10 AM, November 24, 2007
Wonderful!
Simple yet brilliant! It amazes me how you pen your thoughts in a flow of words that are so coherent!
-Max
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Gotta Be Max, at 10:36 AM, November 24, 2007
Sneha: I am glad you find pleasure reading them...
Max: :)
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Ships, at 11:56 AM, November 25, 2007
arre
tu khud likhti hai yeh poems ki chaapti hai kahi se :P
that is a compliment...really nice poem i must say :o)
By
Anurag, at 7:53 PM, November 25, 2007
Nice post sweetheart !!
- Acquaintance
By
Anonymous, at 1:32 AM, November 26, 2007
Nice blog gurl!!
By
Unknown, at 12:53 PM, November 27, 2007
Very loving!
By
Phoenix, at 6:52 AM, November 28, 2007
Nice!
-- silent admirer!
By
Anonymous, at 9:55 AM, December 13, 2007
i lik yr blog , so nice n hav anice n rich new year....
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Anonymous, at 3:51 AM, January 04, 2008
You enjoying the thrill of life,
Me just enjoying you..
Excellent poem..and the conclusion was better than excellent..
Cheers!!
By
Ravish, at 6:10 AM, January 10, 2008
abhi tak update nahi kiya.... grrr! I'll stop visiting ur blog now!
(no need to accept the comment)
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Mayank, at 1:03 PM, January 13, 2008
Hi Ships - dropping by after some time - just read your last two posts together - both were really good in your usual, flowing effortless style... keep writing.
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Roon, at 8:24 AM, January 20, 2008
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